Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It is obvious that in today's world the technological advancements pave the way to find out events happening around the world. But, a controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether it is necessary to inform all this information. Some people believe that knowing about this information can help humans to increase their quality of life. However, others may take the opposite viewpoint and claim that they will affect our lives in a negative way. In my opinion, the latter belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint some reasons to support my perspective.
The first point coming to my mind is that today's world is surrounded by lots of terrible events such as wars, famine, accidents, and crimes. In fact, for today's people that have a lot of problems in their personal life, informing about world news may result in making them feel depressed and overwhelmed. According to a recent study conducted by one of the most reputable universities in our country, it is demonstrated that the more people are prone to world news, the more they feel not to be happy and frustrated.
Most of the people believe that there are more opportunities for people trying to inform about different events around the world. They mention that people should know the world well to be able to take proper actions. Although this point of view is true, people with this opinion should consider the fact that informing about whatever happening around the world may mislead people and create a sense of fear which results in paralyzing them from taking strides in their life. The experience of my close friend is a good demonstration of this issue. Despite she was such an intelligent and creative person that easily could apply and study at one of the best universities of the world, she was influenced by the bad news of terrorist groups like Daesh and Al Qaeda and as a result, she decided to stay her hometown close to her family. In other words, I strongly believe that people that are living in a safe environment even at the price of not knowing some things and not experiencing them will able much better to shape their future and follow their dreams.
The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified is that following the world news can lead to a waste of time in many people's lives. For instance, most of my co-workers spend a lot of time to discuss political issues rather than to do their job well.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that it is more beneficial for people to limit their source of information as it is difficult to be prone to bad news every second and not to be affected by them. In fact, today's world does not have much to teach us and we do not need to be aware of all the events in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 455, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d claim that they will affect our lives in a negative way. In my opinion, the latter belief is tr...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
... follow their dreams. The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65524193548 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50361016649 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489919354839 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3907920022 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.526315789 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1052631579 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199530831471 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652152849802 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473908229495 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111610712665 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437138327489 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.