Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers who are the most important part of our society. They play a instrumental role to educate the children of our society. Without their efforts our children would not get right guidance. Some people thinks that teachers should not make their social or political views known to students In the classroom. Others disagree. In my view, teachers should not disclose their views on classroom due to the following reasons.
First, it affects the children ideology. Teachers social and political views can influence the children thinking, which is not always good for children. It hinders their independent thinking evolution. For example, when I was in high school, one of my class teacher who He is that time when President Bush was ruling in USA. He said that Bush was a criminal and USA is a terrorist nation because they killed so many people in Afghanistan, Some of my fiends discussed about that issue after the class. They thinks that USA is actually a bad country that killed so many innocent peoples. When I grown up and enter into college I realized that the teachers claims Was false. USA is not that type of country as presented by the teacher.My accumulated knowledge says that the teacher was wrong. As you see, how the teacher views affect the children thought.
Second, sometimes undesired situation has happened when teachers share their social views on classroom. For instances, the incident was happens in our high school. But at that time I was in University.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
... about that issue after the class. They thinks that USA is actually a bad country that...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
...killed so many innocent peoples. When I grown up and enter into college I realized th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
... of country as presented by the teacher.My accumulated knowledge says that the tea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, second, so, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96385542169 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57719326599 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6216135017 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7058823529 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21295604989 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741366154017 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107842473488 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162673328663 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859593014372 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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