Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
It goes without saying that in this progressive world where we live, most people are inclined to be influenced by other people either positively or even adversely. In this vein, the relationship with other people has a pivotal role in our happiness. Recently, there has been a hot debate among people about the idea whether keeping the small number of people for many years has a profound effect on our satisfaction or making many new friends is significant in our life in terms of enjoyment. Personally speaking, I firmly hold the opinion that the ability to maintain a relationship with a small number of people play a crucial role in gladness. To support my point of view, two significant reasons are being explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that the reason which has made the relationship with a few numbers of people has more benefit and to be more important for us lies behind the fact that we can trust to each other in all of the aspects in our life, so it gives us a sense of satisfaction and pride. In this line of thought, it should be noted that human beings in particular younger people from all corners of the globe are striving to improve their friendship to be happy in their life. It is worth bearing in mind that the number of people around us is a major factor in our relationship and have a noticeable effect on our behavior. Therefore, the more we keep the old friend in small number the more the sense of trust will appear in our friendship and the higher happiness and enjoyment emerge in our life.
What is more, it is no secret to anyone that maintaining a small number of people for many years not only has a positive effect in our characteristic but also it plays a crucial role in our relationship with each other. To be more specific, it is believed by many people that in the last decade, people have been looking for ways to improve their communicating with other people, so if you are surrounded by many people, you are not able to create a better relationship with others. To put it simply, the large number of people have a different view, desire, wisdom, and opinion and it may have a negative effect on friendship, which means that the people are inclined to keep their friend in a few numbers since they know each other easily and it is easy for them to go out with each other and create the better relationship.
In conclusion, given the reason mentioned, I firmly believe that every people should maintain a small number of friends or people around them since there is a link between the number of people and our happiness. This is because if ones have a few numbers of friends, they can trust each other easily and this feature helps them to be successful and happy in their life and because everyone can create a better relationship with each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 590, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ability to maintain a relationship with a small number of people play a crucial role in gladness....
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...fact that we can trust to each other in all of the aspects in our life, so it gives us a s...
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Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iness and enjoyment emerge in our life. What is more, it is no secret to anyone ...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...is no secret to anyone that maintaining a small number of people for many years not only has a po...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...lieve that every people should maintain a small number of friends or people around them since the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57058823529 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57383172827 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411764705882 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3031274142 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.5 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4285714286 20.6045352989 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285867690752 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118155937798 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626018568358 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195687215437 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411495225875 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.