Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In civilized and modernized societies, human beings have always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives. Today, it is axiomatic that young people usually spend the longer part of their lives with their friends. A plethora of people possess the conviction that it is better for maintaining old friends over a long period of times than making new friends easily, whereas others might exactly hold the opposite view. I firmly endorse the first conviction instead of later one. In what fallows, I am going to aptly delve into the most outstanding reasons to advocate my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that after a while, old fiends become like family members, which can give rise to a strong relationship between them. It should be stressed that when people spend much time with their old friends, they get well familiar with ethical characteristics of each other. Therefore, they are well aware of good and bad manners of each other. By and large, it is established beyond doubt that they trust each other, and this fact is the main reason why they maintain their friendships for a long time. In my own experience, I have two old friends that I just always talked to them about my life problems without any concern. Because I trust them and know that they do not reveal my secrets. In essence, I do not want to talk to new friends about my life problems.
Another equally noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that from a psychological standpoint, people who do not have old friends and quickly change their friends for a short time suffer mental problems. Therefore, they should be under the supervision of a psychiatrist. One of the startling facts, which flabbergasted me, is that why people erroneously think that those who make many new friends are happier than those who have old friends. In fact, it is possible that new friends can hurt one's life and overwhelm her or his. The noteworthy statistics revealed by a social research in my country, show that the most important factor contributing to life of happy individuals is the ability to retain strong relationship with their old friends. Consequently, they would not have been happy had they not maintained friendships with old friends.
To put it in briefly, all the enumerated reasons lead us to the conclusion that the maintenance of relationship with old friend not only makes people happy, but also it can increases trust between people who are friends for a long time. However, a paramount issue that must be mentioned is that this cannot be used as a prescription for everybody and some counterexamples might exist, which are not mentioned above. As a result, conducting more surveys and studies are suggested to answer this question more precisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in brief, in fact, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95780590717 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72875513978 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516877637131 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3179519984 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.904761905 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266778849414 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732072640371 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708710893052 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168469647747 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304767108088 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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