Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities
What are the communities? are they really important todays? are individuals care about communities? Some people believe that young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities, while others disagree. Both sides of the arguments have considerable reasons for supporting their claims. However, I do believe the former side is true because of two important reasons.
First and foremost, nowadays, we live in a competitive and stressful world, and young individuals are much busier than in the past. so they do not have enough time to spent on other things. take myself as an example, I am a college student, every day I wake up at six, I go to university and work on my master project until noon. After that, I go to work in another city and it takes me three hours to drive to the city. I return home mostly at midnight. And sometimes I am so tired that I even cannot eat dinner. every day this schedule is the same, and rarely I spent time with my family or friends. As you see, because of the busy time table, I can hardly find free time to spend on other things, therefore I am not able to help my communities.
Last but not least, in the past, cities are much smaller than now. therefore, they had a closer relationship between them rather than todays. Thereby, they cared more about their communities. For instance, my grandfather said to me that when he was a child, there was little distance between the houses and individuals could see each other many times in a day. Also, he said whenever a person had a problem in the neighborhood, most of the individuals wanted to solve his/her problem. but compare to nowadays, cities are much bigger and people interact lees with each other even though they have fast transportation to move between cities, but they rarely give time to helping their society or even their families.
All in all, for the reasons I have mentioned, I agree with the following statement that youth do not give time to helping their communities. I suggest to governments cauterizing this issue in schools, in order to have a better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, really, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71739130435 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65475084182 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0133040152 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319269215789 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778757789189 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116500247358 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205932817993 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953411473065 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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