Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities
Some people hold a view that nowadays young people make a minor contribution to society compared to previous times, while others have a different attitude toward this point of view. I strongly agree that youngsters are not willing to help their communities. I will explicate my viewpoint in the following paragraphs.
The first point to be mentioned is that the advancement of technology has made young people addicted so that they hardly pay attention to the needs of their surroundings. My cousin and his friends are good examples to demonstrate this incident. They go to a game club every other day and they spend about three hours a day there. I remember one day our grandmother was not fine and wanted to be looked after by my cousin, he did not accept her request because he preferred to go to the game club with their friends.
Another point coming to my mind is that nowadays parents, unfortunately, love their children extremely that every time they get into trouble, they support them immediately which causes them to not take responsibility. In other words, there is always someone to rely on for them. Let’s compare the parental behavior in the past decade with the present. I remember when I was children, my mother forced me to write my dictation on my own under any circumstances, while my mother did the homework of my younger sister when she had put them off for the last minutes.
In addition, I think that education systems in the past have focused much more on encouraging humans to help others and participating in public benefit activities. Also, they strongly condemned such traits as selfishness and irresponsibility. In contrast, nowadays there is a special emphasis on self-centeredness.
According to what has been discussed above, I believe that things have changed and unfortunately young people tend rarely to corporate with their community
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'tend'.
Suggestion: rarely tend
... changed and unfortunately young people tend rarely to corporate with their community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, while, i think, in addition, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02875399361 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97480634536 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6196725665 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156340701374 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521238782581 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514815958805 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955475671937 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559524421894 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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