TPO-18 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
All of us surrounded by lots of people. The condition is a little different for students, since, they are in relationship with their friends and teachers. Although both teachers and friends have pivotal impact on students, I do believe that the influence of friends are more than teachers.
First and foremost, students are in the same age with their friends or in close age and they have a lot in common. They spend most of the time of each day with their friend in school or even after school with each other. So, students are highly affected by their friends. For example, I have a ten-years old brother who is interested in soccer only because his friend is a professional soccer player and spend most of his time with him to learn soccer.
Another prominent reason is that, students like their friend and accept their opinion easily. It is a kind of principle that you accept some one's speech easier if you like him/her. This principle comes true for students as well. For instance, I had a close friend when I was a college student whom I spend most of my time with and liked her too much. I trusted her in an unusual way and accepted all of her speeches. After a long time, I found that lots of her speaks were not true and she deceived me even about her family member.
Last but not least, teachers often appear as a person who teach students not as a friend whom they talk to easily and the subjects of their speaking usually are lesson-based. This issue causes students not to get familiar with their teachers and it makes the teacher's role less important than other students.
In conclusion, even though, teachers have a prominent effect on student's lives, friends play a more significant role. Friends have a lot in common with each other, students like their friends and accept their talks easily and teachers are not as close as friends to students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64264264264 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39931107416 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5215137869 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9411764706 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208020957531 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822324324449 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610803021049 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135955964549 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272699870067 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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