Is it important to do a job that you enjoy or to earn a lot of money?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2815.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70993914807 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08809523492 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 17.0 212.727598566 8% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.0344827586207 0.524837075471 7% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 861.3 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 58.0 20.6003584229 282% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 8.0 20.1344086022 40% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 5.0 48.9658058833 10% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.5344827586 100.406767564 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.5 20.6045352989 41% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.45110844103 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.53405017921 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 11.8709677419 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 58.0 3.85842293907 1503% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175265817338 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117336764472 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385921610156 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175265817338 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 0.56 8.01818996416 7% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 5.0 86.8835125448 6% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 10.002688172 35% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 10.0537634409 52% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.