Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The number of visitors, who visit museum has been increased significantly for the last few years. Now it is almost certain that people will enter into museums, if there exists any such places there. I believe that the changes in tastes, search for knowledge, willingness to know about the past are the factors, which have significantly contributed to the of this trend. Nowadays visitors of different ages visit museum for gathering knowledge from the past.
First and foremost, histories are of great importance to us and we can learn lessons from past. This might contributed to increase number of visitors in museum. We can have an idea about a nation by taking a look at it's history and getting idea about the past, museum is the best place. Nowadays people all over the world have quest for learning past history of a country. As a result, museum remains at the top of the list of travelers, while they go to any tourist destination.
I also believe that self development and to get rid of hackneyed thinking, people also see the museums in their travel places. Earlier days, people used to watch the nature & historical places, but now the thinking and choice has been altered and people have been moved to see the museums. By doing this, they can have a different taste and develop themselves. For instance, of late the national museum of our country become one of the top tourist place in our country. This is so because visiting this museum people can know about our past such as how the country become independent, what are the reasons that motivates our ancestors to fight against the evils and all these give rise of patriotism among the citizens.
To put in briefly, quest for knowing about the past of a country, self development, deviate from trite things etc. all are the primary factors, which changes the number of people visiting museums. Till now this trends have been increasing trend.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'quested'.
Suggestion: quested
...Nowadays people all over the world have quest for learning past history of a country....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this trends have been increasing trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, look, so, while, for instance, in brief, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8085106383 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4914988611 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1289751993 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221741106222 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747603909175 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551699976022 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136485126884 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066569206168 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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