Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
The children's education has always been attached great importance since children are not only the future of families but also countries. Some people doubt that today's parents pay more attention to their children's education compared to parents in the past as a result of the overwhelming stress from society put on people today. However, I am still in favor of the view that parents today are more involved in educating their children
Firstly, today's parents know more about the importance of education than did parents in the past since more of them have been educated and benefited from education. Many countries and organizations have made their effort to improve the average education level in order to help more people have capabilities to make a living by themselves and shake off poverty. In a consequence, those people who have abtained essential knowledge and skills for living by education are going to have a more sensible understanding of what education means to a person as well as their children. Therefore, they are more likely to attach greater importance on their children's education and be more willing to be involved in it.
Secondly, parents nowadays have much more capabilities to get involved in their children's education today since they possess more knowledge and skills than parents had years ago. We actually can compare parents and their children in education to lakes with different capacity and lattitude. The lake with bigger volume and higher lattitude can supplies the lake with smaller capacity and lower lattitude by flowing water just like the parents can teach their children using their knowledge. Furthermore, the bigger lake's capacity and latitude determine how much it can do this job which is like how much knowledge parents have determines how far they can educate their children.
Admittedly, there is the phenomenon that today's parents are too busy on their work to care about their children's education. Nevertheless, we can not ignore the effort that most of today's parents make on their children's education.
In a nutshell, I hold that today's parents are more involved in their children's education than before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lakes'' or 'lake's'?
Suggestion: lakes'; lake's
...heir knowledge. Furthermore, the bigger lakes capacity and latitude determine how muc...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the todays') or simply say ''most todays''.
Suggestion: most of the todays; most todays
...less, we can not ignore the effort that most of todays parents make on their childrens educati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68167020755 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468571428571 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1017540269 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.461538462 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.622034827065 0.236089414692 263% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292580494449 0.076458572812 383% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176921566767 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.45433357414 0.150856017488 301% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107432417657 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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