In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Our life has become more advanced as compared to before. we might face many troubles that our parents do not have experience in handle deal with them. From my vantage point, i believe that tody many of youngster is making their decisions independently for the following reasons.
To begin with, many of young individuals could depend on technology to have perfect information. For instance, when I finished high school, i depend on myself on choosing my collage. I used the internet to look at which specialist was convenient, had a good income, good future after graduation. All that information i could get it from an internet website. i could not depend on my parent on make decisions about this subject because they have limit information in the advancing world. In opposition to my father, he could not make anything without asking my grandparent Due to their life was not sophisticated at that time. Everything was easy and their life did not have diverse types of problem, work.
Finally, young individuals are growing up independently. For instance, many of students today are studying and working In order to help their parent on tuitions fee that make them more independent that help them to build their persoanlities and make them behaive wisely because they havea good opportunities to face live"difficulties. In addition, Most of the students live on the campus in order to stay near their college and to save transportation fees. All that makes student are far from their family. As a result, when they make their decision by ownself because of they
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...hen they make their decision by ownself because of they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01908396947 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98910526846 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4807674384 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316690249437 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967832644553 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748293574903 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210686821193 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782930463519 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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