Question :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is generally assumed that society plays a paramount role in order to honored teachers. Keeping this in perspective, whether teachers' dignity was more in the past than current days has always been a much-debated argument. Despite this argument asserted that teachers were more appreciated in the past, I believe otherwise, maintaining that more educable people exist now and breakthrough in media and technology.
First and most obvious, we cannot lose sight of the fact that people in the past were less educated and this matter effected on the attitude of people toward teachers. Strictly speaking, With changing in demands of nations in current situation, people are more awareness about the teachers and the duty that they play in upbringing of children. For the purpose of illustration,let's take the example of that children in the past were reluctant to go to the school, but nowadays it is more different, due to the efforts of teachers who try to make a positive atmosphere in class for all young people. It leaves no doubt that teachers have more dignity and value than past.
Another equally important point to consider is, with breakthrough in mass media, people on around the world get the news very fast. In essence, mass media make people more knowledgeable about sacrifices that a teacher do to educate their students. The best example that fits in this argument is, some teachers fight with any natural disasters like tornado just for their students and go to villages to teach them. It goes without saying that people are more periciat of teachers nowadays.
In the final analysis, although some might contend that teachers were more valued in the past, I take issue with them and believe this mind-set is nothing but a tunnel vision that fails to consider the importance of awareness of people nowadays. In the grand scheme of things, It behooves that parent always respect to teachers due to the great duty and impact the teachers plays in upbringing of childrens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00903614458 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64162465075 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6991071072 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 5.45110844103 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241147711441 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925706069512 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473934411321 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154130980298 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365924004642 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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