Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
I believe that this is a very debatable topic. Each person gives different responses to this question some of them prefer gets up early and other prefer to stay up late that all these responses depend on their experiences, emotional concerns, and even educational background as well as the situation we are. Therefore, when it comes to me, I prefer getting up early. I would like to illustrate more clearly why I prefer getting up early in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I do believe in this Iranian proverb that "getting up early getting happier". I believe that in the morning we can use positive energy from planets which they are near the earth. I think until noon time passes slowly, and we have a lot of time for our works, while afternoon we can gain more time. The time passes very fast. When I have decided to prepare to take the TOEFL test, I have got up early around 5 AM. I opened a library, and I started to study. Until noon, I had a lot of time for my studying but afternoon I didn't know very was time.
Getting up early not only help me do more but also I can do better. In my culture, people believe that the God split distribute our daily food in the morning, and people who get up early can gain more than others.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can easily reach a conclusion that if we get up early, we can have more happiness, more time and gaining more daily food.So I prefer getting up early.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39852398524 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50247083139 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5420878052 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28749487422 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107355667176 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865592029751 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18639986196 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741266537286 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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