Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The population of the world is growing rapidly. Some people prefer to stay away from each other and live in small villages, or in the country. But most part of the population prefer to live in big cities. And I’m one of this people and I’m going to specific my reasons for that opinion.
First, live in a big city can bring more opportunity of work. Big companies are usually located in metropolis. Indeed, better salaries are for the employers who works there. Furthermore, the best universities and colleges are located in big cities because they receive more investment from the government. A good example is some parents move away from small town because they want their kids to go to a better school. Also, pay “in-state” tuition is way cheaper than “out-of-state”. Even the student is living in a small city and decide to go to a college in the same state, when they graduate, they need to move to a big city if they want to find a job in the field of study. All that is decisions need to be made when they choose a place to live.
Second, big cities have more entertainment for the dwellers. I grew up in a city with over than a million habitants. I remember that I had so many different things to do on my days-off. I could go to museums, movies, and restaurants. In my city we have a vary of restaurants at the same street. I never got bored about places to eat. In another hand, small cities don’t offer that variety of entertainment. Usually small cities has a limited amount of restaurants. And it is better you like the ones that exist. Otherwise, you will not going out to eat anywhere.
Although, big cities are known about their problems, I still believe is a better place to live if compared to a small town. Specially because in the past years, the government are focusing to find solutions for major problems. Traffic is a good example. Big cities usually have a lot of traffic. And one of the solutions the government is finding is to improve their public transportation system. In this way, people will leave their cars in the garage and opt for the bus or subway. Another cities are becoming more green and implanting a bike system with signalization and parking.
In conclusion, live in a big city is the best way to fulfill our lives with different activities, find a good job and build a career, and experience the best days that are to come. If the city has a problem, we can always find a solution and keep moving for the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...live in big cities. And I'm one of this people and I'm going to specific m...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ion habitants. I remember that I had so many different things to do on my days-off. I could go...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... different things to do on my days-off. I could go to museums, movies, and restau...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...es, and restaurants. In my city we have a vary of restaurants at the same street. I ne...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...nes that exist. Otherwise, you will not going out to eat anywhere. Although, big c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59375 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86555680738 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9022237342 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3870967742 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4516129032 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35483870968 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219018581078 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564700677337 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824184204057 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143649723703 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106432096181 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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