Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There are some moot points about living in a small town or a big city. The question of which place is better has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. When it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that I prefer to live in a big city. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that nowadays due to the economic recession and inflation, job opportunities decrease dramatically. There are more job positions in the big city because there are more factory and corporations in these cities, therefore, people can find careers in big cities rather than small towns. As a case to the point, I vividly have encountered with this situation. When I was a master student at a small town for affording some costs of my education, I needed a part-time job. Thus, I searched some times for a part-time job but I could not find any position because there was limited place in that town. On the other hand, when I came back to my city, I could find a good part-time job very quickly. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that living in a big city is better than a small town.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that the facilities in the big cities are more than a small town. For instance, there are more hospitals, more public transportations, more entertaining facilities and, etc. My personal example demonstrates this reality, I have an uncle who lives in a small town. I vividly remember two years ago he got a chronic disease which any doctors in his town could not diagnose his illness. Hence, my uncle decided to continue his treatment in our city where was a big city. The corollary of this action was the first doctor in our city identified his disease and cured him very easily. My personal example shed some light on the point that big cities have more advantages than small towns.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, I vehemently prefer to live in the big city. These kinds of cities not only provide more job opportunities but also, have more facilities than small towns. As a consequence, it is better to choose a big city for living.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63080684597 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74293413832 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464547677262 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0293365441 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4761904762 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246527758805 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840980082449 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826679339094 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18307701102 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773387415746 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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