Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs Which one of these opinions do you agree with Use spe

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Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Technology and its development is crucial for the prosperity of any country which is why governments spend great amount of money over it. In my opinion however, I disagree that governments should spend as much funds as possible over the improvement of technology. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points to support my view.

To begin with, most part of the population lives in destitute areas which are in dire need of basic necessity. As the technology flourished, governments now gives more importance for its development which is why other basic needs for people are lacking. The population in rural areas has increased plenty and people there sometimes do not have enough resources to live. Therefore, government should keep balance so that their country prosper well. To exemplify, in my country we had advanced technology in big cities which played major role in our country's economy. However, in small town and cities people do not have basic resources like education, transportation, food, health, and housing system. For this reason, most of the population led our country backward. My country's feudal system and inappropriate funds investment is a big hurdle in its development. Therefore, this example elucidate that it is not significant for the government to spend as much money as possible for technology.

In addition, the advancement in computer and technology has already achieved to peak which means this does not need more funds. In my country education is a huge problem because our school and colleges do not have enough money to support. This is why we have low literacy rate. Although technology is important but there are various other education that people required for success. Thus , it is very advantageous for my country if the government pay more funding for education rather than for the development of technology.

In conclusion, I agree with the statement that government should spend more funds on basic need. This is because, poor population in my country is a hurdle for country development, and because education is other areas than technology requires more money.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16231884058 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88738738551 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484057971014 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4714284851 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290305716353 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10103877797 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074212401435 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20844814729 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034002494948 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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