Sometimes filmmakers make movies that are based on books. When a movie is based on a book, some people prefer to read the book before watching the movie. Other people prefer to read the book only after they have watched the movie. Which do you prefer and why?
Both watching movies and reading books are interesting entertainments in my town. Each one has some distinctive features which another one lacks. With this in mind, some people choose to read the book of a story before watching the movie based on the book, while others prefer opposite. As a one who experienced both, I personally, prefer to see the movie first and then go for the book and in the ensuing lines, I will delve to substantiate my point.
The first reason is that watching movie wouldn't have any excitements if you read the book first but the opposite situation is not true. As movies have both visual and sound effects, they are generally more interesting and fascinating. But, this feature could be completely ruin if people know the story behind the scenes. Accordingly, seeing the whole movie seems to be frustrating. My own experience is a compelling example of what I mean. In the last year, my brother recommended me reading an amazing book named “The girl in the train" which was the best seller book. As I eager to enhance my English ability, I started reading the book and finished it after a month. Meanwhile, I understand that the movie with the same name was produced and I decided to see and enjoy it. But, I found myself bored during the movie because scenes were not interesting to me as I knew the details in advanced. So, I couldn't tolerate watching the movie and left the cinema whereas my friends whom didn't read the book, followed the movie with a strong enthusiasm.
Secondly, reading a book after watching a movie is still attractive. As the narration of the movie is so faster than the book, it miss very details and interesting components of the original story. As a result, people can find new materials in the book and enjoy the way author described the scenes precisely. Moreover, people can understand the story behind the movies better by reading it later. When my brother see the movie named "The gone girl", he missed the sequence of story and confused. Thus, he decided to read the original novel to understand the exact story. After reading the book, he said that: "Now, I figure it out why a character in the movie acted irrationally".
In summary, all aforementioned reasons bring us to conclude that watching movie before reading a corresponding book is superior as you wouldn't miss the beauty of the movie and still the book is interesting enough to read.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, whereas, while, i mean, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81710213777 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76529654884 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498812351544 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4865813258 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1818181818 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451147531138 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139865915328 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115130653589 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309599920301 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608490350906 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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