Tpo-23, Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people like Japanese people believe that have to work quickly. Especially in some jobs such as the aircraft industry, stock market, speed is completely vital. From my viewpoint, work quickly will increase the fault. There are some important reasons for my assert, in the following, I will explain them.
In the beginning, in this society, most of the works play an important role in the life of humans. Namely, the plane engineers, if they make the first mistake, will have irreparable losses such as crashing the airplane and passengers surely would die. Though the rapid of doing works is so significant for airplanes industries, the safe flight is more important. Therefore, between work slowly with increasing the accuracy rate and work quickly, in this case, slow work is better.
The other reason is, knowledge and science are improving today, in the future, also humanity can acquire more information. But imagine, these data do not be exact. What will happen? It surely has negative consequences, many people will lose their life for wrong knowledge. Nevertheless, in the future investigators will force to spending most of the time to correct the mistakes which creates an interruption in the progressing speed of science.
Finally, I remember two days ago, decided to cook a delicious cake. So, I went to the kitchen and started to make it. Suddenly, my father called me: " we will go to your home one hour next". Oh, I had a lot to do, cleaning the room, making the food and cake and etc. So, I cooked the cake fastly without enough accuracy. After one hour, my guests came to my home, and I welcome by slices of cake. unfortunately, with the first biting, my father said loudly, it is salty. I mixed salt instead of sugar to food. Therefore, if I was not rush, the cake would not be salted.
According to have mentioned in the above, I think working slowly and make
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ning the room, making the food and cake and etc. So, I cooked the cake fastly without en...
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Line 4, column 407, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... home, and I welcome by slices of cake. unfortunately, with the first biting, my father said ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81901840491 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63950059261 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4269663292 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3043478261 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1739130435 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30434782609 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209303021811 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521972021738 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531230597463 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124011909922 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618630592172 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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