TPO-47
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In notifying individuals of what is happening around the world, the news performs a vital role, as well helpful to be updated on the current issue surrounding them. People can receive various benefits from the news, even if it is far away from them. Keeping up with the news is important for the issues are present in this day in age.
To begin with, it is about the local news. The news from a local area is essential to advise people about activities that may influence communities and to allow people to learn decision-making processes in society. For example, if a neighborhood reports an accident, it will be the resource for people learning how making a solution and considering the social impact of this event.
In addition, it is about the national news. Studying national news improves people to obtain a sense of political view. It is especially significant for nations that have several fields of community cores like cities or towns. Keeping up with the news, which happens in inland is essential for people to understand and criticize the community they are living. So, individuals could grow their sense of responsibility for their motherland. For example, a crisis event provides a chance for individuals to discuss the following influences on society and the resolution to the problem. Consequently, the discussion may change the direction toward the right side.
Furthermore, it is about the international news. The global news provides a macroscopic scene of the world, which promote people to consider the trend of the current development of the world. The news could involve matters of high consequence, including war, climate, the economy, and so on. It is useful to stay updated with the international news, which would produce a global awareness, encouraging people to observe the world from different perspectives and help them to progress informed decisions.
Consequently, to stay up to date with current events is important while people can be an informed citizen. Learning about the news opens up one’s mind to everything happening. Individuals can find out about how different somebody’s life is compared to themselves in another part of their state, country, or world. Conversely, without the news, people would merely receive information from the activities happening in close areas with them. It is important to realize what is going on in any part of the world because it still affects each. News opens people’s eyes to the horrors of the world, but also the kind happening in the world.
Now, after analyzing various factors, I will say it is crucial to know the news appearing around the world, even if it is far away from me. Keeping up with the news makes me informed of the world, making me more intelligent also giving me an opinion on certain issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ews, even if it is far away from them. 1. Importance of local news The News fr...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ering the social impact of this event. 2. Importance of national and internatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92564393409 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1675472469 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926858032064 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345619420468 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324074546456 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621103245692 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252485606057 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.