TPO 48
The new world has its pros and cons. New era have brought by itself convinience and technology. However, these advantages come along with the complexity of the new world. Complexity in new era is most obvious in big cities with their twisted highways and roads, subways and generally all the stuffs related to everyday life. These complexities bring with themselves a change in the way of life for people living in new era and the most prominent change that must be done in peoples way of life in new era is more organized and planed life for them . Eventhough there are still some people that hold the idea that one should take life easy and planing makes living rough, I hold the opposite view and blieve that without having a strict plan, no one can succeed and reach his golas in new world. I elaborate on my reasons for such idea in what follows.
Comparing the new world with the old one, the first reason that comes to my mind is that complexity in new world results in more tasks in everyday life. In the past, an individual had some specific and almost repetetive tasks that he had to do everyday. For instance, a peasant had to take care of livestocks and corpses in the same manner every year for all of his life. Conversely, in new world an individual has so many more tasks to do in his life in addition to his career. He must take care of his bank account, transportation credit, academic affairs, business relations and so many other tasks. Consequently, it is obvious that without a clear schedule and plan, there is no chance for him to take care of them aptly.
To cut the story short, in new era with its complexity, comes numerous tasks. to fulfill all of these tasks, individuals must have a reliable plan for their life or they will not succeed. I strongly suggest for the ones who do not believe in planning to do it for just a month and i guarantee they will not regret.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... more organized and planed life for them . Eventhough there are still some people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome specific and almost repetetive tasks that he had to do everyday. For instance...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ost repetetive tasks that he had to do everyday. For instance, a peasant had to take ca...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...h its complexity, comes numerous tasks. to fulfill all of these tasks, individuals...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... planning to do it for just a month and i guarantee they will not regret.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47550432277 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42930667384 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7104594662 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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