In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than today. Do you agree or disagree?
In my perspective, there will be more cars in use than today in coming years. I will substantiate my standpoint in forthcoming paragraphs emphasizing on two salient reasons.
First and foremost, with the availability of plethora of lucrative job options, people are becoming financially able to purchase their own car. Almost every country’s government is now emphasizing on creating more job opportunities whether be it in national or international platforms. Moreover, the changing face of community with quality education has equipped individuals with the necessary skills and responsibilities for any kind of work. All things put together, people earn more than today in future and they will likely tempt to own a car rather than opting to travel in public vehicles. For instance, until last year my elder brother was working as lecturer in a college. As soon as he completed his master’s degree, he was promoted to assistant professor and his monthly salary was also doubled. This made him possible to save a lot of money and as a result, he bought a car last month. He is of the opinion that, owning a car would make his life way easier.
In addition, people like to travel in peace without having to cope with different kinds of people in public vehicles. Most of the individuals do not like to be disturbed while travelling as they are constantly thinking about the works they have to complete that day. For example, the public transportation system in my country is quite unmanaged. It’s often crowded and I often find difficulty finding a seat while going to my college for lecture. Consequently, I can’t contemplate on my presentation or topic of my lecture as I need to cope with a lot of different kinds of people whom I meet in the bus. On top of that, when I have to travel standing in bus, I get exhausted and feel tired that day. I think it’s far better to own a car and drive peacefully without any disturbances to my work. Soon after saving enough money I am considering to own a car as well and I am sure many of the young individuals think in similar way.
By the way of conclusion, based on the aforementioned arguments, it is reasonable to believe that there will be more cars than today in coming years. This is mainly because people are becoming financially able and they like to travel with ease.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, as a result, by the way, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9705464858 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529556650246 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7050079953 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.65 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173946238806 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603834967153 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105348482973 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158662877691 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947584510386 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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