At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
There are substantial number of people who are of the opinion that the importance of sport course or social activities is as the same as other classes and university must pay financially attention to this course. I personally agree with this idea and cogently elucidate my viewpoint with following reasons.
To begin with, the students need mental health as well as physical health. So, as far as the university concern about the education of student, it must aware of the fact that healthy mind is in the healthy body. therefore universities must care about sports programs and invest on them to have sharper students. For example, if after long day with lots of mental work, students do not have exercise, they might be sick of study. As a result, it is the university's responsibility to provide proper place for their sport and let them become physically relax after lots of studying.
secondly, life is not just education. Students need to learn the ability of social communication for their future life. Apropraitely, university is the best place for learning social interaction because students have a lot of chance to take part in social activities like holding up an exhibition or conference or even they can creat party for discussing about political issues. So, universities must financially support their movement to help growing their social abilities.
additionally, students sometimes learn more out of class than inside. by taking this into account, the universities attention into entertainment activities get a great importance for better education of students.
In conclusion, universities are the place where students can be matures in different aspect. Thus, university's goal must be included not only the education but also the social ability of students and support them financially as the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91244120197 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0132913233 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221281630979 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766479844117 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676680928483 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131473964492 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405321796072 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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