What are the good qualities of a good son or daughter?

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What are the good qualities of a good son or daughter?

The contribution of parents in the lives of their children cannot be underestimated because they do lots of sacrifices for the betterment of their kids. So, It is a liability for children to value the struggles of their parents by achieving some good qualities such as honesty, generosity, friendship and to name a few. These qualities get changing over times and resulted in a deep responsibility, I think. My next sentences will explore such qualities which gradually change over time.

First and foremost, if we closely look at the developing years, we will find that a child must have to be polite from his cognitive thinking years. He should be enthusiastic about the good manner, culture, and religious practices. Moreover, they should be attentive to the study and passions so that they can make a bright career, and it will bring peace for parents. Another point is that they should have the habit of speaking the truth, as a result, they will trustworthy to parents, and our father or mother will proud for us.

Secondly, If we focus on the adolescent and teenage periods, we find that children sometimes loose interest to listen to parents. Even, many times they hurt subconsciously and do misbehaves frequently, even with seniors. Many of them become an obstinate boy or girl. I think that this time, these children should be careful about these points. They should have to master some patience practice and forgiveness virtues. If they make mistakes, then they can seek an apology to that person. Actually, they always should keep in mind that an apology, patience, self-realization is a basic qualification for being a human. These qualities will help them to be a good son or daughter.

Furthermore, a good son or daughter is always careful about his duties for parents when he turns to an adult, and parents get older. He has to be more painstaking for parents as they were for us. He has to find some times to pass with parents. He can make a trip with his family members including both father and mother. Generally, when people turn to older, they become too much emotional. So, children should be more sensitive so that their parents can never get any hurt from them.

In conclusion, the aforesaid points show that children have different duties at every stage of their growth. These duties are actually called the qualifications of a good son or daughter. I believe that if anyone can learn good manner, keep patience, and ensure his duties, he can be a good child.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o find some times to pass with parents. He can make a trip with his family members...
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Line 9, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure his duties, he can be a good child.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86150234742 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73809663451 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50234741784 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4629722387 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.84 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175068994348 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641870785004 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118495525814 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124145964708 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825325269717 0.0645574589148 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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