What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important
Working in our days is very frustrating. There are many employers that abuse from their employees, so it is really important to choose a place that have an excellent supervisor in which we can support. I believe that they must have a few qualities, but for me the most important ones are considered and grateful. I think this way for two reasons which I will explore in my following essay.
First of all, in many jobs in the United States, employees are being treated unconsidered. The salaries are reduced and people have to work really hard, without compensation or vacations, so people who work in a peaceful place should consider working for a long period and be indebted with their bosses because those places are rare to find. My personal experience is a compelling of that. About five years ago, I worked in a dental office. The dentist who I worked with had a terrible behavior, not only with their employee, but with their patients. He did not care about their assistant and he never consider us. After I realize that will not be able to continue working there, I quit. Now I am working in other dental office, where my supervisor is respectful. He is a loving person and thinks thoughtfully of us. That is why it is important to work with someone that appreciates your work.
Moreover, a boss should be grateful with their workers, because we as employees always tried to make our work the best possible. Let me give an example to shed some light to this discussion. My supervisor is a great person, he is worried about us and he always reward our good actions. Last Monday he gave me a gift because I did an outstanding work. Every weekend he organizes a meet up for all the coworkers and recognizes the development of each one. Those actions are appreciated by us.
In conclusion, being grateful and considered are the qualities that a boss should have to be a good supervisor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I will explore in my following essay. First of all, in many jobs in the United...
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Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
...care about their assistant and he never consider us. After I realize that will not be ab...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'rewards'.
Suggestion: rewards
...n, he is worried about us and he always reward our good actions. Last Monday he gave m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, so, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65773809524 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70442385285 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.194920746 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5238095238 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109084598739 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324185444081 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495364743773 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928888088168 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565780765275 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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