When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why?
While some people think that courses in art and music should be eliminated first due to schools not having enough funding or teachers, most of the people believe that physical education classes should be cut. I believe that physical education classes can be cut but art and music has to be preserved.
One of the chief reasons for my view is that art and music are the only activities in the school which allow for relaxation of mind. Unlike other courses, these do not tax the brain or the body. Even if physical educational classes are removed, keeping art and music is important to maintain the balance and allowing relaxation time for the mind and body. For instance, doing exercises might be tiring. Students might become tired and enervated. They deserve relaxation times to cool their mind and body.
Another reason for my view is that Art and Music allow the students to get creative. Other courses stick to the textbook and traditional rules. For instance, games and exercises are bound by rules and stress the body. Art and Music instill creativity into students which is an important aspect for being successful and standing out in a crowd of many students.
Some might argue that lack of physical education classes might cause students to become unhealthy. Yet we know that they can always exercise at home by playing sports or hitting the gym or enrolling for some private sports coaching programs.
For all the reasons stated above, I believe that physical education classes should be removed first.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93774319066 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40461259425 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3417258586 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419662265646 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137750729977 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.177159840836 0.0737576698707 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250930049669 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220054065791 0.0645574589148 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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