Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's generation everyone wants to achieve more and more in their life. People want to experience every risk to get success. Some people think that taking risks is a good factor, hence they are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities. In my opinion there are many reasons that some people maybe attracted to dangerous sports.
Firstly, everyone is very busy in their life. They want to enjoy their life fully. Some people like to participate in dangerous activities for fun. It is their passion toward the sports to live life differently. These kind of people do so many different things like- skydiving and paragliding. In my life I have seen so many amateurs participating in these kinds of activities.
Secondly, in this time some people want to face every dangerous activities. They want to reduce their fear for these activities, so they try them. Whereas some people need to execute these dangerous activities, as a part of their job, like- actors. In movies we can see so many risky stunts conducted by actors. It is their duty to make their movies more entertaining; they need to do danger sports or activities in movies.
Furthermore, other people just want to show that they are superior than others, hence they try these dangerous activities. They want to become famous. These kind of people sometimes get hurt. To perform the dangerous activities or sports we need to prepare a lot. If we will not be prepared for that, we can create problems for ourselves.
In conclusion, in this world different kinds of people live. Everyone has their own choices to live their life. Some people live their life in a simple way. They do not want to try any dangerous activities which will become harmful for them. However, it is good to experience everything in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...their life. Some people live their life in a simple way. They do not want to try any dangerous ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89869281046 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61416053008 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457516339869 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.537611478 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.96 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.24 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246437028868 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852263030577 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991270927537 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16935752496 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748253998901 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.25 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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