Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Future of societies totally depend on the person or generation who is making decision. Their decisions often cause different consequences in the future, that’s why to choose the right one in really important. I believe that young generation have great influence on making decision which determine the future of society.
First, in modern era, we use technology that makes our society better and comfortable. Young knows how to operate technology and maximum utilization of it. For example, Mark Zuckerberg invented Facebook that provide huge social platform to connect people. He achieved this success in very young age. He gave better networking site to connect and gather information in the field of person’s interest. There are numerous other inventions done by the young generation because due to better education. And that provided them strong will to stand for future society. That is how youth contributes in the society.
Secondly, young people play important role to influence political decision. Young people have different perspectives and a host of different ideas. By allowing them to voice their opinion we could be opening and moving the political world forward. This is not only good but necessary for society. To keep the policy fair and sustainable for future generations, involvement of youth is undeniable. For example, equal rights for women required many young women to engage and influence the policies that provide them equality. If women are educated then they can raise their children well and give them better future. This is another example of how a youth can create the future for the society by contributing in the politics and policy change.
In conclusion, youth is precious treasure of the society. Young can take reformist steps in decision making for the society. Because they are educated and aware of the recent situation
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 298.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28859060403 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7217640676 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6402318165 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6363636364 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5454545455 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236406888988 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663126877969 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834712792335 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144561270648 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07725663219 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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