In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

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In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?

It has long been a subject of discussion whether using more credit cards in cashless societies is beneficial or not. In my opinion, the latter notion has several strong elements that deserve attention and i will explain why using pertinent arguments.

My viewpoint has a myriad of arguments. The most perceptible one, to start with, lies in the fact that majority of elements are based on biased figures obtained from global and local sources. Not only does it reveal some astonishing figures that prove the point of cashless societies about using more credit cards, but it also encourages one to consider more details further down the track, which gives a transparent and logical reasoning to the people of today's world about importance of credit cards rather then using cash. Self-evidently, all these viewpoints stands credit cards in good stead, as far as people are concerned.

Another vital facet of the argument is that, based on some real-time facts and figures, people are taking crucial decisions after considering all the associated merits and demerits. Besides a few shortcomings, it is up to the authorities to further educate the people and allow them to take a sensible decision. Therefore, it is quite evident that why many are in favour of my viewpoint.

From what has been discussed, one can conclude that the benefits of credit card for cashless societies are indeed too great to ignore.

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Average: 7.7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...about importance of credit cards rather then using cash. Self-evidently, all these v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, then, therefore, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07725321888 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68827169263 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618025751073 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5817672089 50.4703680194 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.3 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233329687221 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751733509785 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796597720518 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130091546943 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571715729794 0.0609392437508 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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