Increased life expectancy , a curse or a blessing
Innovations in medical science have made it possible for people to sustain a healthy and longer life span. People are now able to get fit even faster than ever before, thanks to new pharmaceutical drugs. But the question is that is this a positive situation or the consequence ,this phenomenon will entail, are more likely to bring problems for individuals and society as a whole.
Well, when it comes to benefits that stem from this trend, people are able to enjoy their more quality lime with their loved ones. Even in many cases , it has been seen that many great grandparents are now , due to increased life expectancy rate, able to see their great-grandchildren and are able to disseminate their ken and experiences among them. As a result , their younger generations are becoming more astute and competitive. Additionally, prolonged and healthy life can help them to stay working for a longer period which eventually help them to stay independent and in-charge of their own lives and decisions. These apart, not only do people are acquiring such ability from their orderlies , but businesses find it profitable to keep their old skilled employees for longer.
On the other hand, their are potential problems looming for new generations who might be thinking of finding employment in reputed companies . The reason for this is old people might go on working on the same positions and can create a tough competitive environment for those who literally have any experience in that respective fields.
To put in a nutshell, this phenomenon certainly have some negatives . However, the positives of this situations are immense, indeed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, as a result, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90081478391 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2296808006 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641425819893 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211733493655 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042151214213 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0284760911399 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328135367421 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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