What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
Everyone has had the chance to work under a boss, a supervisor, or a leader of some sort, at least once. Now, they all have their way of interpreting this experience- sometimes extraordinary, other times awful. But, what qualities make a boss a good one? I, personally believe that approach, good advising, and motivation are the keys to an accomplished boss for the reasons explained below.
A boss should approach his employees well, because that will determine the quality of their work. To illustrate this, let’s take an example of a day at an office. Your boss enters your working environment frowning, and looking straight at you with an interrogating purpose. That, indisputably, will make you feel intimidated, and frightened. What’s the boss looking for? Does he doubt my passion for the job? These are questions that will go through your mind. Eventually, you will grow to hate your manager, and the quality of your work will decrease. It will either happen spontaneously, as your superior makes you dislike your job, or on purpose, as you start hating the guilty party for this consequence. Based on this illustration, and similar real-life events, if a boss is not able to build a good connection with his employees, then that will have serious outcomes in the efficiency of work conducted.
Another practice a good boss should apply is advising, because that will lead employees towards achieving general work goals. My own experience poses evidence of this. When I was working for my first job, I had little knowledge about the end-of-the-day targets. Those were the unspoken goals that we had to accomplish at the end of our turn. Now, when I learnt of this from a colleague, I kept repeating to myself that I had to hit those targets by four o’clock. However, I had no idea on how to actually do that. In such time of trouble, my first boss came to me and advised me to work on one target at a time. By the end of the day, I had finished all my duties. In other words, a good supervisor should always give advice, and be his underworkers’ guide, in order to achieve success.
In addition, a supervisor should be able to motivate his employees. It is not unusual for workers to be having a bad day, meaning that no matter their attempts, the case that they are working on is just not showing results. This can happen even on a company scale. In such a situation, it is a supervisor’s job to motivate his employees. If he constantly tries to arise persistence, and faith in the working environment, then workers will surely practice such virtues to the point that the supervisor won’t be needing to repeat his actions. In conclusion, motivative bosses thrive in their professions.
In brief words, I am of the opinion that a good boss is approachable, adviceful, and most importantly motivative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, well, at least, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85626283368 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99376941693 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533880903491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.294395042 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96666666667 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161818917837 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04730841342 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616838876831 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108190167264 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648779854523 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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