TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to various rules that young people have to follow, some people claim that those rules are too stringent, therefore stifling individuality. But others argue that rules are vital for the youngsters, and I am one of them.
In the family, young people must follow some rules made by parents. When I was a little child, my parents usually asked me to get back home early when I went out for playing with my friends. Parents mainly worry about the safety of their children, especially of young girl or at night. Moreover, some of young people often complain that their parents teach them saving money again and again. I really think this complaint is unreasonable because young generation are impulsive consumers by and large and they temporarily don’t know how hard it is to make money. Family rules do not end up here. Probably some of us are asked to respect the old. This rule is also of vital importance for a harmonious family.
As we grow older and enter the school or the company, there are also varied rules that we should observe. Take my school for instance, if a student’s GPA can’t maintain above 2.0, he or she has no qualification to graduate and the only way for this student is to be a lower grade student to improve the GPA. Withou this rule, many students may not concentrate on their studies and play all day. Eventually, they graduate from the university with none of professional knowledge, just has a piece of diploma.
Last but not least, except for the rules of family, school and company, we similarly have to follow the every kind of laws. Laws about legal drinking age are advantageous to young adults’ physical health. It is a common knowledge that drinking at an early age is detrimental: it may cause mental incapacity and excessive reliance on alcohol.
From the above discussion I firmly believe that rules, no matter in family, schools or society, are necessary and should be obeyed by young people. Only rule-abiding citizens are capable of living a secure and prosperous life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, similarly, so, therefore, except for, for instance, kind of, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83806818182 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65166108229 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2843462009 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6315789474 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153017175914 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497954326333 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554512730907 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898184708624 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527266393045 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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