Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the

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Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.

Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

Today topic argue that the law and legal system cannot solve many matters of modern society. I partially agree with issues are impossible to deal with legislation matter, however, in the portion of my community has the possible solution for it as well. The following essay will show why such argument cannot be generalized that the problems of modern society could not resolved by laws and the legal system and advantages and disadvantages on both side.

Admittedly, legal based solution might not give the detailed settlement for prevalent problems in the whole communities. According to the author, the relentless mind of general people are one reason of it. In addition, to deal with all the incidents of our society are involvely and perplexingly convoluted so devising one exact solution probably not exists. For example, speaking of economical issue, if we pass a bill on regulation of an accident to solve it, the prediction of it spread out and deteriorate another problems in diverse areas. Nonetheless, it is hard to admit all the issue cannot be mended by the legal system according to the following reasons.

First, endless emissions of carbon dioxide are going to be importantly argued to a problem of global warming and legal solution performed significant achievement to relax the effects of carbon dioxide on increment of temperature in the whole earth by making a law related to regulation and restriction of factories. In more details, the government impose more burden taxes on the companies depending on the amount of producing carbon dioxide. After that, the companies has been tried to make a possible alternation of sources of engine instead of using carbon dioxide.

Second, interesting group will be the main issue discussing the possible agreement of different group. To take the problem and find common ground, united states adopted the organization of republican and run the national assembly to find the middle ground. even though the most people have the different minds and desires in society, we figured out the possible ways to maximize the total benefits of member in our society.

Secondly, starvation of poor people are main issue in modern society. To call to remembrance the solution of it, we have established the foundation for them at least to keep up the least quality of their life by the law. For example, the government in some states managing the complimentary restaurant for homeless people and they also provide professional education programs to help the people who are seeking the jobs. by setting the minimal systems to support the second-class citizens, the social problems of increment of those people are not rapidly increasing today, even though it decreases.

In conclusion, even though it seems enough to say the law and legislation system effects nothing to solve many problems of modern society, we have already seen several examples which benefits to devised a solution of modern society. Therefore, it is hard to generalize which side on this issue are dominant and it would be better to consider all the sides.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'resolve'
Suggestion: resolve
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Line 13, column 462, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, speaking of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5244.0 2235.4752809 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 611.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.58265139116 5.05705443957 170% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97176167858 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.33802160003 2.79657885939 262% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46317512275 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1315.8 704.065955056 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.59117977528 138% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.501969219 60.3974514979 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.2 118.986275619 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.55 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0312405547741 0.243740707755 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356882154487 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398656760308 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335793268499 0.150359130593 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254749025517 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.73 48.8420337079 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.1 12.1743820225 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 33.08 12.1639044944 272% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 24.5 11.8971910112 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 11.7820224719 212% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people&#039;s hearts or minds.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the

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