Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Earth is a place important for evry living being to live. Earth is only planet known till now having the environment liike having oxygen, water, pants and so on for living. Some people believe feels that human activities make Earth a better place to live. Others disagree. In my view, Earth is being harmed by human activity for two important reasons.
First, Ecosystem is imbalanced by human activities which creates natural disaster. When trees are cut down it brings slides and floods. For example, I read once in bokk stating that people kill tigers for their skin which today has resuted in making them as an endangered species as thre are very few white tigers left and they are the point of extinction, similarly, the situation is with one horned rhino, where people kills them for their horn and they very few left. Also, the telecommunication have created extinction of different species of birds. These ncidents create imbalance in ecosystem. Cutting down the trees have created slide to occur too frequently, whcih takes away many house in eainy season. As you can see, the impact of human activities is very bad on Earth which rather than making it a better place to live, it is leading towards destruction of human and other creatures as well.
Second, human activities have created in global warming. When trees are cut down, factories are established, more poisonous gases comes out which destroys ozone layer ans brings rise in tempearture. For example, there was mentioned in a journal i read once that every year temperature has been rising. Furthermore, I read that it some gases like carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide which cause it. These gasers causes depletion of ozone layer and brings rise in temperatue of Earth of which amny animals are suufering. There are many animal getting difficulties in adapting to this temperature where as there are people in some parts of the world, unable to survive these temperature as they fall below the poverty line and do hont have enough income to use fans ans coolers. This article related to these gases and global warming showed me that human activities are damaging the Earth.
In sun, human activities, on bringing changes with advanced technologies to make their job easier and to live a lusirious life have created damged to Earth by imbalancing the ecosystem and also on global warming which rather than making Earth a better place for human to live they had bad impact on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: gases'; gas's
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...e parts of the world, unable to survive these temperature as they fall below the poverty line and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, similarly, so, well, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91084337349 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48374012664 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4338660257 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.263157895 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312694998654 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113621564472 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142945523634 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224220925113 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110480124715 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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