Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
It is undeniable that satisfaction of people with their lives is a popular topic which has caused heated in a long period of time because it affects he or she in their daily lives. Depending on personal experience, personality type, and emotional concern, people differ greatly in their attitudes toward this issue. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement that satisfaction of people with their lives is less than the past. In the following, I will try to explain the specific reasons which I think are the most common viewpoints nowadays.
To begin with, I strongly believe that technology is one of the most factors that made our today lives more interesting than were in the past. For example, my father told me that when he was in high school he did not access to internet and he faced so many problems to search about any subject. Thus, as far as happiness and satisfaction with live is concerned, today world's progress in the terms of technology and facilities is a considerable aspect which made people's lives more interesting.
Another equally notable point supporting my opinion is that these days major discoveries in all area such as science, engineering, medical, to name but a few, have caused people enjoy more in their lives. For instance, my grandmother died a long time ago, when I had not born, because of a heart attack. But last month ago, thanks to the doctors in hospital, my grandfather was saved from the very same heart attack. I think if we lived in the past, my grandfather would be die because of the lack of medical facilities. Thus, it seems that significant discoveries made our lives full of hope to having a better live.
Last but not least, these days people live in a better financial situation because industrial's developments have provided people with more opportunity to getting well paid jobs. Thus, the families, in which all members can work individually and make enough money, has more options to entertainment themselves in many different ways. My grandfather told me about his boring life which he could not have fun during his adolescent because his family has lived in poverty.
To sum up, by taking into account all the above factors, we may reach the conclusion that people are more happy with their lives due to the huge progress of technology, and major discoveries in all field of since, and their well-being financial condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...s full of hope to having a better live. Last but not least, these days people li...
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ecause his family has lived in poverty. To sum up, by taking into account all th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86374695864 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72654200275 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537712895377 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9969112263 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9375 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319139474782 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102504466156 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960192553847 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172956594421 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690584427847 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.