"All students should be required to take the driver's education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years, several accidents in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers. Since a number of parents in Centerville have complained that they are too busy to teach their teenagers to drive, some other instruction is necessary to ensure that these teenagers are safe drivers. Although there are two driving schools in Centerville, parents on a tight budget cannot afford to pay for driving instruction. Therefore an effective and mandatory program sponsored by the high school is the only solution to this serious problem."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument. The following appeared in a letter to the school board in the town of Centerville.
In this letter, the author recommend that the local high school should sponsor a driving schools and that this solution is helpful to resolve the teenagers driving problems. even this program is not unhelpful to some extent, but there are several unsupported assumption renders the conclusion unreliable, the untenable assumption would mitigate the reliability of the author's recommendation.
To begin with, the author assume that the driving problems involved teenager in centerville are already so pressing that it requries immediate action. Based on this assumption, the author argue that teach the teenagers by formally driving instructions. however, this assumption is problematic due to the lack of exact number of traffic accidents involved teenager drivers. it is also vague to determine whether the teenager drivers should be responsibile for the accidents. In addition, we also do not know whether the teenager drivers are from centerville. if these accidents are not serious, and they are not caused by local teenager drivers, the authors' recommendation of establishing driving schools would be unpervasive.
Moreover, the author assumes that parents do not have time, nor do they afford the bill of driving courses. however, it is necessary to consider whether driving schools are the only solution to resolve the problem of teenager drivers. perhaps, those parents who complain they are busy may just take the exeuse to escape from the responsibility of teaching their children; perhaps those who are on tight budget may be just a minor proportion; perhaps the funding from local authority is also an alternative scheme. if any of the above possibiilty is true, other solution may overshadow the author's recommendation.
even the above assumptions are tenable, the author's recommendation is not necessary until the solution of driving schools proved to effective. The author may be too optimistic for the validity of this program. it is unreasonable to assume that all parents including those who are willing to teach their children driving to accept this mandatory programs. In addition, the author hashly conclude that the local high school should funding the program without elobrately consideration of their finance situation. In addition, it is also unpreditive to know whether the number of accidents can reduce after implementing this program. if this program causes overall complaints among parents or schools cannot afford the it, this program should be promoted, even if the decrease of accident numbers is unguranteed.
In conclusion, whether we can abopt the author's recommendation depends largely on the reliability of the author's underlying assumptions. if these assumptions are untenable, then this recommendation may be unwarranted and we should can consider alternative solution to resolve the teenager driving problems in centerville.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: To begin with, the author assume that the driving problems involved teenager in centerville are already so pressing that it requries immediate action.
Error: requries Suggestion: requires
Sentence: Based on this assumption, the author argue that teach the teenagers by formally driving instructions. however, this assumption is problematic due to the lack of exact number of traffic accidents involved teenager drivers. it is also vague to determine whether the teenager drivers should be responsibile for the accidents.
Error: responsibile Suggestion: responsible
Sentence: In addition, we also do not know whether the teenager drivers are from centerville. if these accidents are not serious, and they are not caused by local teenager drivers, the authors' recommendation of establishing driving schools would be unpervasive.
Error: unpervasive Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Moreover, the author assumes that parents do not have time, nor do they afford the bill of driving courses. however, it is necessary to consider whether driving schools are the only solution to resolve the problem of teenager drivers. perhaps, those parents who complain they are busy may just take the exeuse to escape from the responsibility of teaching their children; perhaps those who are on tight budget may be just a minor proportion; perhaps the funding from local authority is also an
Error: exeuse Suggestion: excuse
Sentence: alternative scheme. if any of the above possibiilty is true, other solution may overshadow the author's recommendation.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: possibiilty Suggestion: possibility
Sentence: In addition, the author hashly conclude that the local high school should funding the program without elobrately consideration of their finance situation.
Error: hashly Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: elobrately Suggestion: lately
Sentence: In addition, it is also unpreditive to know whether the number of accidents can reduce after implementing this program. if this program causes overall complaints among parents or schools cannot afford the it, this program should be promoted, even if the decrease of accident numbers is unguranteed.
Error: unguranteed Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: unpreditive Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion, whether we can abopt the author's recommendation depends largely on the reliability of the author's underlying assumptions. if these assumptions are untenable, then this recommendation may be unwarranted and we should can consider alternative solution to resolve the teenager driving problems in centerville.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: abopt Suggestion: about
Error: centerville Suggestion: centerpiece
Error: unwarranted Suggestion: No alternate word
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 439 350
No. of Characters: 2385 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.577 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.433 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.939 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 201 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 168 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 104 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39.909 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.725 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.447 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.687 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...resolve the teenagers driving problems. even this program is not unhelpful to some e...
^^^^
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...tent, but there are several unsupported assumption renders the conclusion unreliable, the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...n would mitigate the reliability of the authors recommendation. To begin with, t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...agers by formally driving instructions. however, this assumption is problematic due to ...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ic accidents involved teenager drivers. it is also vague to determine whether the ...
^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... teenager drivers are from centerville. if these accidents are not serious, and th...
^^
Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...t caused by local teenager drivers, the authors recommendation of establishing driving ...
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Line 8, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...hey afford the bill of driving courses. however, it is necessary to consider whether dr...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Perhaps
...esolve the problem of teenager drivers. perhaps, those parents who complain they are bu...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 515, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...uthority is also an alternative scheme. if any of the above possibiilty is true, o...
^^
Line 8, column 590, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...true, other solution may overshadow the authors recommendation. even the above ass...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...shadow the authors recommendation. even the above assumptions are tenable, the ...
^^^^
Line 11, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... the above assumptions are tenable, the authors recommendation is not necessary until t...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...istic for the validity of this program. it is unreasonable to assume that all pare...
^^
Line 11, column 631, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...reduce after implementing this program. if this program causes overall complaints ...
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Line 11, column 712, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
... among parents or schools cannot afford the it, this program should be promoted, even ...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...In conclusion, whether we can abopt the authors recommendation depends largely on the r...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... of the authors underlying assumptions. if these assumptions are untenable, then t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 2260.96107784 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57858769932 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03494657814 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 204.123752495 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439635535308 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 758.7 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0581938903 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.45 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.70786347227 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164713277516 0.218282227539 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587421430827 0.0743258471296 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395040396914 0.0701772020484 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965762019295 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533830138087 0.0628817314937 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.3799401198 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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