Downtown Zurzi is becoming increasingly congested with traffic, increasing the commuting time for those who work downtown or near downtown. The nearby city of Loft was faced with the same problem several years ago and implemented a small weekly tax for driving one's car downtown, Downtown traffic almost immediately subsided in Loft and the local government also raised much-needed money for fixing the roads elsewhere. obviously, this plan should be implemented in Zurzi in order to solve the brewing traffic congestion problem.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Traffic jam is very common problem and it hampers our life in many ways. It kills our valuable time. In the editorial, author claim that the solution of decreasing traffic jam in Loft will also very fruitful for the Downtown Zurzi. He said that , by applying weekly tax for driving one's car can reduce the traffic as it sloves the traffic problem of Zurzi. To prove his claim valid, he has to consider some facts.
In the passage, there is not clearly mention that the congested traffic is a result of increasing car. The traffic can cause for increased number of population. When there is a vast number of people, then transport have to be increased for their communication. Bus, rickshaw, cng etc. transport can increase for their communication instead of car. In Loft , people may predelict to car than any other vehicle but, it can be happened that the people of Zurzi are not using cars. So, applying tax only in car can not solve the congested traffic problem.
Secondly, the roads of Zurzi may be parochial than Loft roads .This is also not clearly depicted in the passage. The government of Loft has sanctioned tax for cars then they raised money to fix their roads.The people of loft can be rich , on the other hand the people of Zurzi might not be solvent to pay the tax. So, when the taxes will apply on them, that can be onerous for them.
Beside these, There is an other factor which is also not mentioned.In the passage it is delineated that, the roads are becoming congested with traffic. The necessary and fundamental things may in one side of the road and for this reason that road is congested with traffic. The school, industry, office, stores etc. essential things are establishing in one side , so there is an alarming increase of traffic. Though tax and repairing road can cure the traffic problem, it can not resolve this situation.
At last, I think that, authors decision is based on some assumptions. Because of this, at first author have to evaluate all the factors and facts to conclude any result , until this will be a moot topic.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1641 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.484 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.327 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.537 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.539 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t the solution of decreasing traffic jam in Loft will also very fruitful for the ...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ful for the Downtown Zurzi. He said that , by applying weekly tax for driving ones...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ir communication instead of car. In Loft , people may predelict to car than any ot...
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Line 2, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people of Zurzi are not using cars. So, applying tax only in car can not solve t...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...f Zurzi may be parochial than Loft roads .This is also not clearly depicted in the...
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...Zurzi may be parochial than Loft roads .This is also not clearly depicted in the pas...
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...en they raised money to fix their roads.The people of loft can be rich , on the oth...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...eir roads.The people of loft can be rich , on the other hand the people of Zurzi m...
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Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...rous for them. Beside these, There is an other factor which is also not mentioned.In t...
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...ther factor which is also not mentioned.In the passage it is delineated that, the ...
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...tial things are establishing in one side , so there is an alarming increase of tra...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...factors and facts to conclude any result , until this will be a moot topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 364.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65934065934 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45512601413 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494505494505 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.22255489022 284% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0839627097 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246436941581 0.218282227539 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754649176873 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572044035522 0.0701772020484 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128121362174 0.128457276422 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712472350145 0.0628817314937 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.3550499002 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.5979740519 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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