The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
The following argument is rife with holes and leaves many questions unanswered. Primarily, the validity of the conclusion that every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin entirely depends on the scope of the assumptions and their plausibility.
The argument suggests that illegal immigrants undermie the autonomy of a nation, while this may be true, the extent is not certain. Importantly, the reason of these immigrants moving in illegally is not mentioned in the argument. They could be refuges, and if so, the country has a humanitarian responsibility to protect and restore the dignity of these individuals. In that respect, the conclusion that immigrants should be returned to their countries may be an inhumane act, violating many human rights. On the other hand, the illegal immigrants may move in to these nations as spies or even terrorists. Inevitably, this undermines the security and the autonomy of the nation, the government shpould then be vigilant and look out for such figitives in their nation. Should this be proved, then argument would hold true and the suggestion that tthe aliens be deported be ideal.
The argument relies on the assumption that the country will be disadvantaged economically by the illegal immigrants, the extent of this is however not mention. The country may have cetralised systems where illegal immigrants may not access medical care, schools among other essential social amenities. If so, then this assumption may prove unwarranted. On the contrary, the country may be primite in its systems such that aliens are priviledged to services and even employement, in that case then the assumption of this argument will indeed be validated.
The author of this argument also ascertains that every effort should be made to deport the immigrants. If the immigrants took a desperate journey to the country so as to escape civil war, then deprotation would be harsh. Proven, the country may lose its autonomy as sanctions may be placed on them by the international community. If such laws are in place, then the argument's recommendation may be misleading and contradictory.
The assumption that national identity will be endangered is not cogent. How will this happen? If the nation is sovereign, the immigrants, being illegal, have miniscule effect on the country's identity. If anything, these illegal immigrant may live in fear of their fate and hope not to be discorvered. If thsi is the case then, the argument is unwarrented.
In conclusiThe author of the argument should provide more insigh and discuss in length the context and scope of the assumptions and their implications on the country. Without which, the argument is inadequate in providing neccessary information for informed jugdment.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument suggests that illegal immigrants undermie the autonomy of a nation, while this may be true, the extent is not certain.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: undermie Suggestion: undermine
Sentence: Inevitably, this undermines the security and the autonomy of the nation, the government shpould then be vigilant and look out for such figitives in their nation.
Error: shpould Suggestion: should
Error: figitives Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Should this be proved, then argument would hold true and the suggestion that tthe aliens be deported be ideal.
Error: tthe Suggestion: time
Sentence: The country may have cetralised systems where illegal immigrants may not access medical care, schools among other essential social amenities.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: cetralised Suggestion: centralized
Sentence: On the contrary, the country may be primite in its systems such that aliens are priviledged to services and even employement, in that case then the assumption of this argument will indeed be validated.
Error: employement Suggestion: employment
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: primite Suggestion: primate
Error: priviledged Suggestion: privileged
Sentence: If the immigrants took a desperate journey to the country so as to escape civil war, then deprotation would be harsh.
Error: deprotation Suggestion: deportation
Sentence: If the nation is sovereign, the immigrants, being illegal, have miniscule effect on the country's identity.
Error: miniscule Suggestion: minuscule
Sentence: If anything, these illegal immigrant may live in fear of their fate and hope not to be discorvered.
Error: discorvered Suggestion: discovered
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If thsi is the case then, the argument is unwarrented.
Error: unwarrented Suggestion: unwanted
Error: thsi Suggestion: than
Sentence: In conclusiThe author of the argument should provide more insigh and discuss in length the context and scope of the assumptions and their implications on the country.
Error: insigh Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: conclusiThe Suggestion: conclusive
Sentence: Without which, the argument is inadequate in providing neccessary information for informed jugdment.
Error: jugdment Suggestion: judgment
Error: neccessary Suggestion: necessary
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 22 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 444 350
No. of Characters: 2262 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.59 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.095 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.874 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 169 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 98 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.976 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.708 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.516 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...took a desperate journey to the country so as to escape civil war, then deprotation woul...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 367, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arguments'' or 'argument's'?
Suggestion: arguments'; argument's
...ty. If such laws are in place, then the arguments recommendation may be misleading and co...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ir fate and hope not to be discorvered. If thsi is the case then, the argument is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, as to, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2260.96107784 103% => OK
No of words: 444.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24774774775 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97578695654 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470720720721 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 19.0 8.76447105788 217% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2416165253 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0833333333 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 6.88822355289 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257068208256 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861039186337 0.0743258471296 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445343520035 0.0701772020484 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144628753823 0.128457276422 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589202676244 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 98.500998004 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.