In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
An expert is a person who is constantly working to achieve aim in a particular field. An expert has in-depth knowledge of their field of expertise because beginner is a person who begins something or doing something for the first time. Experts have great knowledge but they focus on a particular topic or area for research. Beginner is trying to find opportunities to prove themselves therefore, I do not agree with the statement that the beginner is more likely for field of inquiry than the experts.
First of all, to find in-depth knowledge about particular field a can only help better whereas beginners are also depend on experts for the guidance. We can see in any field the senior provide training about related work to the neophytes and trained them. When a fresher passed from engineering degree course join multinational company then he or she learns work of world with experts of the company. As well as to become master in any field the newbies start their journey under an expert of at work. So to gain information about any field one should approach to dexterous of that field other than a beginner.
Additionally, we all are aware with the phrase "a little knowledge is dangerous thing" and the beginners have little knowledge than an expert. Such as to get information about income tax the expert give holistic information and guide us to save tax but the beginner has little information. One more important thing is experience play important role. An expert person in field of income tax has bookish information as well as experience but the beginners have only bookish information. It is clear that the beginners are not as much important as experts to get information about field.
However, after doing a lot work in any field the experts become saturated with more innovative ideas. They do not think out of box and find new possibilities around their already done researches. Where as the neophyte explore the researches and tries to find something new. But the experts put their attention on a particular topic and gain in-depth knowledge For example, Newton discovered Gravitational force but he did not stop the work and started to find applications of the gravitational force. After doing such a great work an experienced scientist can give more information than a beginner.
Conclusively, the argument has loop holes as above mentioned reasons and therefore it is not acceptable that the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contribution in any field of inquiry. The knowledge is also flow from higher to lower as energy flows from higher energy level to lower energy level. So the experts plays an important role to provide proper information about his or her working area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... help better whereas beginners are also depend on experts for the guidance. We can see...
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Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...s around their already done researches. Where as the neophyte explore the researches and...
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Line 6, column 502, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pplications of the gravitational force. After doing such a great work an experienced ...
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Line 8, column 232, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'flowed'.
Suggestion: flowed
...field of inquiry. The knowledge is also flow from higher to lower as energy flows fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97385620915 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77968322873 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448801742919 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2420791293 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.772727273 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209944712014 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743708081718 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625568682513 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132103101563 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338751031174 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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