Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In every country cities play a vital role in reflecting the status of the country.All cities must be given equal importance and utmost care should be taken by the government in maintaining the integrity of cities.Cities reflect integrity and nation’s cultural tradition and maintaining them is equivalent to maintaining country’s cultural tradition.I strongly believe that government must ensure that their major cities receive financial support they need in order to prosper.
In a country there are many cities.Each city has its own uniqueness and it must be preserved as it is very important.The cities cultural tradition,its heritage should be maintained properly and for it to happen,the government must allocate and release funds on regular basis.Consider an example:Suppose X is a country and there are 5 cities under it namely x1,x2,x3,x4,x5.Now all these cities together will reflect the nation culture and heritage.There is something special in each city and it’s the duty of the respective government to look after it.If they are not looked properly then it will create wrong perception in the minds for people about the city as well as about the country.
For any city to maintain its culture and heritage there is requirement of cooperation both between people and the government.People can cooperate by abiding with the rules which government proposes and government must cooperate by releasing funds,looking after its culture and tradition,planning ways to forecast its culture to wider section of audience in the world and so on.If funds are not allocated properly or the cities do not receive proper financial support then how will the culture and tradition be maintained and preserved.
Receiving financial support can be through any means like allocating funds for releasing money to maintain dignity of cities,proper maintenance of the historical structures ,proper execution of financial plans and so.For Example consider city Hyderabad located in India.It is famous for pearls ,food and historical structure namely Charminar.Now they all reflect the tradition of the cities and in turn these also reflect the tradition of the country.So proper financial support must be required by government in maintaining city’s status.
Thus receiving financial support is absolutely necessary.Without receiving any financial support its difficult to maintain the cities respective culture and heritage.Financial support is possible with the help of government and how these financial support is necessary is discussed in the above passage.All cities together reflect the country’s tradition and hence they must be taken with utmost care and support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, then, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66913580247 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33682852877 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459259259259 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 23.0359550562 352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0507550765 60.3974514979 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 459.2 118.986275619 386% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.0 23.4991977007 345% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.21951772744 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34833602821 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232229518084 0.0831039109588 279% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547695927555 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232229518084 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547695927555 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.8 14.1392134831 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.66 48.8420337079 -57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 12.1743820225 306% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.79 12.1639044944 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.38706741573 136% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.2143820225 307% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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