Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement presents a claim that the governments need to provide financial support for their major cities to maintain the cities’ development because these places are generating and preserving the nation’s traditional cultures. Although this sounds correct, there are more aspects that might be analysed.
In the first place, it is important that the nation maintain their major cities in order to thrive them. The biggest centers are responsible for a great part of the country’s development and a financial support to these cities is mandatory for a government that is concerned about their people.
However, the reason claimed by the text is that the cities will thrive due to the creation and preservation of the nation’s cultural traditions. Notably, the culture is very important for a society, but it can’t be the main subject of a nation. The focus of the politics might be health, education and safety. The main cities ought to receive money in order to increase and to solve their social problems and that is the paper of the governments. A place without basic infrastructure will be never a good place to live even with a rich culture.
Indeed, this type of governs’ plan exist nowadays and are very dangerous to the people. There are a lot of places, for example in Middle East, where the religion and other cultural traditions are the main excuse and explanation for dictators to be in place. Also, the fanatic promoted by the governments is the main tool to alienate and blind the society, on the other hand, they claim to be some type of “god” sent by the superior creatures and what they say are absolute true and cannot be refuted by their people.
Under those circumstances, the nation’s cultural traditions are important to the people and have to be preserved and created, however it cannot be mixed with money and politics. The major cities have an essential paper in the country and the government need to supply them in the best way possible, but with the right reasons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, for example, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 340.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01470588235 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88860516381 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.797169514 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298130322505 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110068768093 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984480223552 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190957799205 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701578912007 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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