Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
The advancement in the field of technology has made all the issues open to the public. Any type of news covered by media personnel reaches within a fraction of seconds, especially with human beings addicted to social networking sites and WhatsApp. Privatization is completely lost and even a small issue is being projected daily as a herculean task. However, the given argument cannot be denied as completely a true or false statement, as it the individual’s action that matters rather than an individual itself. Every man or woman could be regarded as a hero provided; they have done something useful for the country.
For instance, consider Mother Teresa who was an exemplary acted as a role model in most of the people’s life through the world. Born in Yugoslavia, she travelled to Calcutta in india and served the ill and downtrodden. she was a true Christian who followed the footsteps of the Christ. she was affectionate to the lepers and took great care of them. Till she gave her last breathe, she succumbed to great difficulties and endured all the pains in the name of Jesus. media portrayed her as a great individual who dedicated her life for the welfare of the needy.
Further, india’s Prime minister Narendra Modi, as a leader of the nation, took innumerable measures to make india a developed nation. he brought about two major changes. one is the demonetization, in which he completely eradicated black money. There was a huge opposition and he was severely criticized by the media because the middleclass and poor people had to stand in long queues to get the money to meet their basic demands. Nevertheless, he achieved the desired result. Secondly, he gave an insight to the individuals about the significance of being clean and hygiene. he campaigned for the Swachh Bharat to foster cleanliness in order to make a cleaner and greener nation.
Also, no one can forget the renowned scientist and the president of india, Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, a role model for the budding youngsters. he practiced what he preached. even at the time of his death, he was teaching the students at a college. he was regarded as one of the best teachers of his lifetime. No criticism has aroused about him. such people are regarded even today as heroes by the society.
On the other hand, persons like Vijay Mallya, could not escape from the limelight of the media. he was the subject of an extradition effort by the Indian government to return him to india from the UK to face charges of financial crimes. The reputation of such individuals is eventually diminished as they are subject to media scrutiny. they cannot be regarded as a hero by our society.
Thus, to conclude, we can be assured that it is the integrity and moral principles of an individual that is important. If we are true to ourselves and to others, then even media scrutiny cannot do anything to diminish the name and fame. On the other hand, even a speck of news could create speculations about the person which could lead to his deterioration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...dia and served the ill and downtrodden. she was a true Christian who followed the f...
^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...o followed the footsteps of the Christ. she was affectionate to the lepers and took...
^^^
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Media
...red all the pains in the name of Jesus. media portrayed her as a great individual who...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...sures to make india a developed nation. he brought about two major changes. one is...
^^
Line 9, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...on. he brought about two major changes. one is the demonetization, in which he comp...
^^^
Line 9, column 581, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ignificance of being clean and hygiene. he campaigned for the Swachh Bharat to fos...
^^
Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... role model for the budding youngsters. he practiced what he preached. even at the...
^^
Line 13, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...ngsters. he practiced what he preached. even at the time of his death, he was teachi...
^^^^
Line 13, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...was teaching the students at a college. he was regarded as one of the best teacher...
^^
Line 13, column 343, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...me. No criticism has aroused about him. such people are regarded even today as heroe...
^^^^
Line 17, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...escape from the limelight of the media. he was the subject of an extradition effor...
^^
Line 17, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... as they are subject to media scrutiny. they cannot be regarded as a hero by our soc...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2534.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87307692308 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84681904908 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.472194141 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7419354839 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7741935484 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16129032258 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167903140765 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415513271366 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495420540411 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855816915611 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466490593107 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.