Issue 4: Claim: Goverment must ensure that their major cities must receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The fact is not a hidden that each country tries to represent positive aspects of their nation through major cities, probably due to the fact that they are centre of attraction for the international diplomacy and visitors. I partially agree with the claim,"goverment must ensure that their major cities must receive the financial support they need in order to thrive".
Indeed, it is important to provide the special attention to the major cities of a nation as they caters comparatively larger amount of population, and more development in such areas will be effecting the mob. But, blindly being spendthrift is definitely not a sagacious decision. Many cases of corruption have been cropping up these days, latest case of involvement of ex-finance minister P.Chidambaram, hold an enormous amount of money in his accounts, stolen in the name of development of the country. The government should have a proper check whether the resources provided are judiciously being invested for development or they are fulfiling the never ending demand of the avaricious ministers of the nation.
Also, neglecting the smaller cities and rural areas is not a sign of being wise. Developing these areas also carry equal importance. When the development aspect of the country is concerned these areas play pivotal roles. Profligating only on major cities and neglecting even the meagre demands of the minor leads to the unstable nation, where people will be clustered into priviledged society and unpriviledged society. Moreover, the reason presented for the claim stands absured in my point of view. .
Major cities are always the paragon of modernisation, developent, lifestyle, and the advancements of the nation, not particularly the values and traditions. Delhi, the capital of India, populated with every caste like sikhs, christians, hindu and muslim, still lacks in culture, as none of the tradition is followed in austere sense. No one can get glimpse of any tradition in such major city.Whereas, minor cities like Mathura, Vrindavan are rich in culture and traditions. The people in such areas give imporatance to their values and it can be sensed even in their eyes. A rural area in Gujarat still embraces our vedic language "Sanskrit", it is the only area where people fluently communicate in Sanskrit, which has long been gone from the eminds of major cities people.
It is important to invest a huge sum in development of major cities but in the name of preserving the traditions and values of the country is not justified. To get a deep understanding of such things requires visit to minor cities which will bleak out when they will not be properly paid attention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2277.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2465437788 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05382203796 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1939981857 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299872623243 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870247135625 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115844522882 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169635181294 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118195545273 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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