People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The topic raises here a controversial issue of behind the scenario of a decision making. Indisputably,Human being are emotion based creation, there is a colossal effect of emotion on their decisions. Nevertheless,Emotion is actually a destructive thing of a human mind, it only evoking the view & situation. Consequently, People who are taking their decision based on this emotion & afterward try to defend this ill reasoning can not considered as sagacious decision maker.
First of all,If we find discreetly what is the effect of emotion than we can see it hobble the human to think his normal logical thinking.For illustration we can find some example from German famous stubborn leader Adlof Hitler.Hitler planned to attack the country who demean Germany during the first world war.He took that revenge decision just based on emotion which stymied him to thought about his own people condition after the war. From this obviously ,it has articulated emotion based decision can not be good solution.
Furthermore, when people understand their doing is well judged decision they try to show some poor logic. It is very crestfallen that rather condoning his poor thinking , one ossified to that poor decision. For instance, In 1971 in the Indian sub continent the two Pakistan side fought with each other. Specifically, the west Pakistan attacked the east Pakistan they emotionally wanted not to separate the two Pakistan sides though the east Pakistan want to be independent. After losing the war, The west Pakistan giving a poor cause that lost the war because of interfering Indian air force, rather than giving apology to the east Pakistan. In this Circumstance, it also demonstrate how people can be so poor decision maker.
Admittedly, This emotion based also can be so dangerous. People are doing suicide just focusing on their decision. For example, The famous linking park vocal Chester Benington did suicide because his childhood & afterward life was so much depressing. So rather thinking logically what happened if he quits, just took the decision for his bad emotion took him to death.Therefore,the detrimental scenario of emotion based decision can be understood form this.
In extrapolation, Although in some cases emotional decision may seem good or logical, in the long run people got tribulation from that deciosin. As long as there is some fact involving the area which are not effective , the above argument can be considered substantive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29591836735 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00862606458 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545918367347 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1526374273 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.21951772744 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336965357437 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113381038303 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915981464845 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197126215445 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646254931376 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.