People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings
than by society as a whole.
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree withthe statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Attribute one possess depends on the society or what they have been taught in the realms where they have grown. People show the attitudes governing on where they are grown. I strongly disagree with the prompt that the one's attitudes are determined by the immediate situations or surrounding. It is everyone's nature that actions or behaviors they reflects is what they learn from the society.
First and foremost, humans are social creatures, we live in a confined society. Admittedly, we follow what we are enlightened by our seniors and also likely to emulate the characteristics of the precedents. For instance, if our society is the group of the high ethical people, who follows the conventions and traditions and religions strictly, then it is compulsion that everyone in the society should follow the same behavior. The society shapes the features of every people in the society. Further, if any other people migrates into that place then those are also riveted to follow the system. Thus, the society confines the members how they act, what behaviors to performed, the way of conduct.
Secondly, it is the human nature, we want to depict our places or society we live. We proudly share the characteristics of our society with other. For instance, we should look no further than the Beauty pageant, in the miss world competition, our representative from a countries tries to make our county proud by representing our traditions, our systems, and our attributes from our society. Thus, it is certain that one likes to follow and otherwise represent the attitudes of their society because they feel happy on share it and satiated by such activities.
However, some might think that circumstances changes the attitude of the people, they behold. But, this seems to be valid only in short terms, rather continuing those attributes for the perennial. For instance, if a person goes to some places for some purposes, he is likely to be familiar or accustomed to the life of that place. However, it is compulsion to be tantamount in that situation though in his inner heart, love and respect of his place exist inherently. One cannot forget or alienate the behavior of the place where he has existed or grown.
To sum up, the actions, activities, way of interpretation and so forth, one serves is greatly influence by their society. They are accustomed to such attributes so inherently that they cannot estrange such features.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reflect'
Suggestion: reflect
...s nature that actions or behaviors they reflects is what they learn from the society. ...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'influenced'.
Suggestion: influenced
...ion and so forth, one serves is greatly influence by their society. They are accustomed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in short, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03712871287 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80953896837 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497524752475 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1685760552 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9047619048 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965055388494 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034858306893 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374918202837 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526728153787 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235095594487 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.