People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Human are the only creatures that can act on their own decision. The writer claims that individuals' reaction strongly depends on forces, so their reactions are mostly out of their own control. I completely disagree with the statement, because it is absolutely problematic in some aspects.
To begin with, considering people's behavior is too general. It should be determined that the statement is concerning about which type of human's behavior. We are forced to do particular task in society according to ethical principal. We are surely not allowed to be either impertinent or audacious. People are force to regard Polite manner in all social communities in public places such as transportation systems, commercial complexes, hospitals and so on. Therefore, being forced by rules sometimes is both inevitable and crucial.
On the other hand, individuals' age plays a significant role in their actions. For instance, the behavior of children under ten are severely controlled by their parents. Hence lots of their reactions in society depends on the elder's expectations. They mostly have to obey the rules assigned by their patents or their teachers. It is not surprising that the older they become the less force is imposed to their behavior. Then, they can act by their own in every manner that they decide.
Moreover, the location that an act is done is so important. People at home are free to do their task in any type of manner. They can talk in a loud voice to each other or play radio and television any time that they decide. They can attend at home in any time, inviting lots of friends and enjoying their time freely. But at work, in their office, they have to regard the limitations. Employees are mostly force to attend in a regular basis, doing the ordered job and leave the workplace in a determined time. In libraries, people are forced to be quiet, and use only specific devices that are not restricted by the library's rules.
In conclusion, people's behavior is forced in some aspects of their daily life. But it is accepted neither always nor everywhere. They obligatory and behavior limitation depends highly on their age, their location and the type of the behavior and reactions. In fact, generally, Individuals think independently and decide on their own to do their preference.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ir own decision. The writer claims that individuals reaction strongly depends on forces, so...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...should be determined that the statement is concerning about which type of humans behavior. We...
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Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...metimes is both inevitable and crucial. On the other hand, individuals age plays...
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Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e severely controlled by their parents. Hence lots of their reactions in society depe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02337662338 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76922586792 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8762702287 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8076923077 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340638815174 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958565705359 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694939479447 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204617454267 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666771472204 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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