Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
scientists are the people who always engage in developing something new which can chage human life stsyle.Some times they fail and sometime they successed, but what is most important is that the change which scientists trying to make must be benefitial to greatest number of people, as recommend in prompt. On the other hand, how people is using finding of scientists that also decide that research is benefitial to people or not. this can be understood in details in further paragraph.
To begin, all the research that scientists do that can be classified into 2 parts. First, for study purpose which help them to understand who the things was previously. For instance, team of scientists engage in study how diansoures get extint from earth. results of this study will not directly benefits people. other is research for developing new things. this kind of research will benifits people directly by giving them totally new way. consider team who is developing new meachin which can clean room automatically without taking help from other. By this invention people can save their time thus finding of such research will direclty giving benefits to people.
In addition, results of any reearch is benifial to people or not is totally depends on the people how we are using them. consider a example, Conversation of atomic energy from radioactivity elemnt to energy in other form. we can develop atomic energy into electical energy which can help us resolve the energy requirment thus this reseach can be benifical to people. On the other hand, same atomic energy can also be used to make hydrogen bomb which is dangerous to human being. thus same research can also be dangerous to human being.
In conclusion, most of research that scientists make must be benefit to most of people. but altimate effect of any research depends on us how we are using them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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...make must be benefit to most of people. but altimate effect of any research depends...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97756410256 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57194114355 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1243383749 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190368611225 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701977851665 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435570737198 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134913559814 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392258203454 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.