Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law is to make as much money as possible.
In this ever-advancing era of technology, various corporations are set up to provide services or ease our lifestyles. On a perfunctory glance, it may seem that such corporations's objective is to serve human needs but therein lies different motives advantageous to the corporation and it's founders. To earn money is the highest priority if not first. So, I agree to the second statement that corporations should focus on making more money staying within the law but have some concessions with the first statement.
The stature of corporations operating in a country of a place is an important symbol of how well the country or the place is developed. Corporations promote economic development of the place which later reflected as an increase in living standards of the people living in the area. Besides, there are ample job opportunities provided by such corporations and services provided that no obligatory responsibility to well being of people seem necessary.
Furthermore, a corporation abiding by the law unknowingly serves the people and society as such responsibilities are included by the lawmakers. If the policy makers of the country cannot include such in laws to be followed by corporations, then it is unjust that such burden falls on the corporations only. For a corporation to focus on the goals set forward, the society it resides in should also be responsible for the well-being itself.
Startups of a corporations may seem unfair to society or environment at first but not necessarily so. For instance, if we look at a n initial set up of a hydropower plant, one may argue that it is unfair to make people abandon their society and move to other locations to make hydropower but once complete, it provides opportunities to same people and help for their well-being.
Some may argue that corporations must be necessitated to employ environment preservation activities but such activities are only burden to the corporations. While it helps in making a little goodwill, much harm is done to the corporation by removing focus from making money.
In conclusion, it is debatable that a corporations should or should not have responsibilities to promote the well-being of society or environment. But due to presented views, I believe that a corporations should be responsible to making money satying within the law.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: ON_FIRST_GLANCE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at'?
Suggestion: At
...rovide services or ease our lifestyles. On a perfunctory glance, it may seem that ...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ssarily so. For instance, if we look at a n initial set up of a hydropower plant,...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...nd help for their well-being. Some may argue that corporations must be necessitated ...
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Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
...y. In conclusion, it is debatable that a corporations should or should not have responsibilit...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
... due to presented views, I believe that a corporations should be responsible to making money s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28940526245 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486842105263 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2958590133 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3125 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393383392848 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125656122552 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780683403867 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198440656439 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764617452143 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.