Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
For long there has been a debate on how a corporation's success will be evaluated. Some of the key factors include the profit it makes, the contribution to the economy as a whiole and the well being of societies.
I do not agree that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible. There are numerous examples where successful corporations have been motivated by promoting the well being of societies and environments where they operate.
Take for example the Robert Bosch group of industries based in Germany. They have their own foundation where they invest a part of their profits on social welfare. This does not however impact the amount of profit it generates. In fact it helps in increasing the sales of its products due to increase in its reputation as a socially responsible organization. Another example is Intel which has a special program for promoting engineering talent among female population.
Similar characteristics of revenue generation are observed in some major Indian software giants like Infosys, Wipro, Tata Consultancy Services etc. The developing nature of Indian economy acts as a catalyst for the implementation of their welfare schemes. Many of these software giants have their own education programs where they educate and provide sponsorship to the deserving candidates.
On the flip side, sufficient revenue needs to be earned to get fruitful results while investing in social schemes. As such with meagre profits, the corporation must strive to increase their profit as much as possible, instead of diverting its resources towards welfare schemes.
Thus it is essential that corportations don't undermine the importance of promoting the well being of societies while aiming for higher profit margins. The contribution of a corportation towards the welfare of society is highly critical to the overall success of a corporation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
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Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, well, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34640522876 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02053433428 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1652082969 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.25 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284571478763 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818801760616 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995975591765 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148633932611 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154155816868 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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