Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
In societies where corporation has a significance role in development of societies. It impact the societies behavior directly or indirectly. In prompt question is raised about upto which extant responsibility of corporation is in society. Either corporation has responsibility to promote well-being of the societies and environment in which they operate or limited to only follow the laws of in which they operates to make money. In my opinion, in different condition either of point can be assume correct. This can be understand with the help of below explanation.
To begin, if you are operating in certain locality then it will be good for both corporation and society if social environment of the location is good. For this corporation must take it has responsibility. If any corporation is not concerned about the environment of the location in which they are working and due to this environment of location is damaging then it will directly harm the corporation only. For instance, company producing some chemical which has a by-product which is thrown by company in local area only without any treatment. Than due to this by-product air of the location get polluted and due to which local people as well as the worker and employee of the company are getting seek. This has a further consequence on the performance of the company. This example shows condition which company may as a loos if they are not taking responsibility of well-being of environment of local area in which they are working.
But, on the other hand if company has no relation with the local area and no direct connection by environment of the location of operation then only by following the law strictly by corporation will full fill their responsibility. For instance, call center company has no direct impact on the environment and by just following law by all the employee of company of local traffic and not doing wrong activity company can full fill their responsibility towards society and environment.
In conclusion, it is difficult to say that responsibility of corporation is to promote well being of the society and environment or limited to following the laws of location where they operate. Responsibility of corporation is varying as nature of work of corporation and condition is varying. Responsibility is subject of circumstances here.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'impacts'?
Suggestion: impacts
...ce role in development of societies. It impact the societies behavior directly or indi...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
...development of societies. It impact the societies behavior directly or indirectly. In pro...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'operate'
Suggestion: operate
...o only follow the laws of in which they operates to make money. In my opinion, in differ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pinion, in different condition either of point can be assume correct. This can be...
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
... local area only without any treatment. Than due to this by-product air of the locat...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a loo' or simply 'loos'?
Suggestion: a loo; loos
...le shows condition which company may as a loos if they are not taking responsibility o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f local area in which they are working. But, on the other hand if company has no...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e local area and no direct connection by environment of the location of operation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 41.0 12.9106741573 318% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14136125654 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19464839229 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408376963351 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3542472243 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.111111111 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385868996384 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131489258986 0.0831039109588 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12925076847 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270846574931 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101636624768 0.0667264976115 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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