Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
According to the speaker people who work under corporations instead of enhancing the society they try to loot money.There might be some cases where not everyone does the same mistake.This breaks the trust in human beings to whom to belief as the real help to develop the society and environment.Firstly,Most of the workers under the corporation first gather attention of by fooling that they would bring a change and develop the society once the elections are done no one really cares.This has become a huge issue in every country.Like for example india,A state was parted into two and the governing person conducted roadshows,attract by giving false promises like developing roads,Construction of schools and employment etc.However as they get into position forget the things to be done and only loot huge amount of money provided by goverment for welfare of society.
Secondly,this could literally make the economy down and no upliftment of business the entire authority who is never questioned by law as they would show some inappropriate working infront of them and make most of the income for their own.Most of them forget to respect the position and authority given to them and benefit so much that will inherit to their next family generations.
Thirdly,The only solution for this is if there is no development people have every right to question the law and if they find anyone making money using the authority need to be subjected infront of law,For example 20 persons were dismissed in india who were filed cases on looting money from people.Severe action to be implemented which can bring fear to the one's doing such corruption.
In the conclusion,The day when the authority is always under survillenace of law and enhance the better society and the there operations are always monitored only then the change would be seen and good development of society with genuine corporations can bring trust in people and make them choose again with good improvement of environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15692307692 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07107135865 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 23.0359550562 352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.632176742 60.3974514979 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 419.0 118.986275619 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.25 23.4991977007 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.21951772744 441% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216450675209 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12905996737 0.0831039109588 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313683259491 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12905996737 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313683259491 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.5 14.1392134831 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.74 48.8420337079 -22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.1743820225 287% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 11.2143820225 307% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 11.7820224719 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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